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May 21, 2011
I fell in love with the scattered and lovely imagery in Hitchhiker by ~pencil-pawn. The poem recreates the feel of flitting thoughts as one stares at passing cars.
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Literature Text
I am counting cars the same way
I count fishes in my sea.
But it is murky like suffocating drains
choking words I can't take back
a lonely side puddle on the road.
I don't look at the metal bodies
but the warm breathing ones
from rolled-down windows, carefree lollipop wrappers
bobbing mainstream music.
I count the drivers and passengers smiles
and theirs is more than the ones you give me.
I understand.
I guess your car and try to find it anyway.
Is it ferrari red?
Like a horse with electric hooves
thundering my loose earth
with ridge muscles
fearless mane hair?
Is it a monster truck?
Like an armoured hunchback
distrusting eyes
banged up front-gate grin?
I'm beginning to think whatever it is
it's black.
As your leather jacket that collects nightmare sweat
old tears
hands too young to belong to
Parkinson.
As your pencilled past that
colours both our lives.
Baby, I have washed-up nickels.
I'll take the bus.
I count fishes in my sea.
But it is murky like suffocating drains
choking words I can't take back
a lonely side puddle on the road.
I don't look at the metal bodies
but the warm breathing ones
from rolled-down windows, carefree lollipop wrappers
bobbing mainstream music.
I count the drivers and passengers smiles
and theirs is more than the ones you give me.
I understand.
I guess your car and try to find it anyway.
Is it ferrari red?
Like a horse with electric hooves
thundering my loose earth
with ridge muscles
fearless mane hair?
Is it a monster truck?
Like an armoured hunchback
distrusting eyes
banged up front-gate grin?
I'm beginning to think whatever it is
it's black.
As your leather jacket that collects nightmare sweat
old tears
hands too young to belong to
Parkinson.
As your pencilled past that
colours both our lives.
Baby, I have washed-up nickels.
I'll take the bus.
Literature
From Whence She Came
Back down to the sea-floor she goes
back to the coracle-clusters and starfish that
clamour, cling to her heart too tight,
walking barefoot towards where she
came from. It is too hard walking on
earth, the way she wears pain like a wedding ring
frightens people.
Back down, down, crawling on her belly
on the forest-floor, alive with the buzz and crawl
of worms and bird-prey. Back where she belongs with her
crazy palpitating wolf-heart, her bloody
deer-throat leaking in the snow, her yellow
eyes in the dark.
Back down, beyond subway trains, piano lessons,
falling rain, from whence she came, to the snow-covered womb
where she fir
Literature
Omen
Through the shadows, I cant see
the growing cracks in the corner
where one wall is falling away from another.
I cant see anything; my eyes are closed.
The dog moans. His sound is long, gloomy
and ominous, with a shallow intelligence
I seem to have forgotten. My left eye
twitches as it echoes up at me,
wedging between my dreams.
My spine curves toward you. I breathe.
I pause in the shower, wondering
why it seemed so natural. In my numbness,
my wrist had brushed your throat. So why,
had I thought about choking you? Twice,
I blink. At the pull of the curtain, I see him
smiling calmy at my feet. His tail
rests on
Literature
6
Either way
It is past seven and there is a rumor that you are coming home.
When I saw you last, I found
that word in your mouth. It was
foreign, a small success for your vocabulary.
I stalked it all the way back to the house,
sucked it clean and dry and no longer holy,
hanging by a horrifying thread.
What will be the first thing you speak of tomorrow;
what wills your growth, what wills you to change?
If we are wanted,
if the earth swirls right, almost cloudlessly,
if you should find my hand and whittle out
a new word
If you hiss
like a turntable
as you try to spin me round and round
It is only seven; I trust you w
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Inspired by: C.M
For: C.M
Maybe I don't know you at all. I thought of this when I was sitting by the road, counting cars, waiting.
For: C.M
Maybe I don't know you at all. I thought of this when I was sitting by the road, counting cars, waiting.
© 2011 - 2024 pencil-pawn
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Congrats Pau
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